ya, needs work.
... let me put it this way... you need to widen up the screen on flash so that all of it is the same size and so that all of it can fit... also, make it so that if you right click, play, you wont see it go out like a movie and keep going!! also i see you actually have flash (mine was a tutorial and expired)T_T i will help you with drawing skills since i saw your tutorial... maybe its the computer drawing, i don't know. anyway.. ill see if i hear from you.